Title: Standard für Error spotting
Course: PULS - Englisch Vertiefungskurs

Standardkategorie für Fragen, die im Kontext 'Error spotting' freigegeben sind.

Task: Read the following plot summary/ review. Look out for basic language mistakes and correct them (6 in the first text and 12 in the second one).

Twilight Saga – New Moon

Bella Swan is still very much in love with vampire Edward Cullen. The rest of the vampire’s who call themselves the Cullens, especially Alice, decide to throw Bella a private party for her eighteenth birthday. The things go wrong when Bella cuts her finger and thirst overcomes the vampires. As a result of the danger Bella was put through, the Cullen family decide to leave Forks, Washington. At first Bella is heart-broken. She never thought she would loose Edward. She will not take part of any social activities anymore. But then she realizes she still likes her childhood friend, Jacob Black. As usual for Bella things aren't what they seem. Something is happening to Jacob what he can't explain to Bella, and their friendship starts to deteriorate. But when someone from Bellas past comes back to haunt her, everything changes again.

Iron Man

Iron Man is an absolutely amazing movie. The amazing yet realistic action is paced by the plot and characters that keep you interested from start to end. Tony Stark is the complete playboy but a engineering genius also. While a visit in Afghanistan demonstrating a new missile he's captured and wounded. His captors want that he assembles a missile for them but instead he creates an armoured suit and a means to prevent his death from a peace of iron left in his chest after the attack. He uses the armoured suit to escape. Back in the U.S. he announces his company will stop making weapons and he begins work on an updated armoured suit. But than he finds out that Obadiah Stane, his second in command at Stark industries, has been selling Stark weapons to the rebells. Tony uses his new suit to return to Afghanistan to destroy the arms and then to stop Stane from abusing his research. I am an enthusiastic Ironman reader. I have collected the comics all my live (from 1 in 1968 to the latest in 2008)...40 years of Ironman. Since I was a kid, I used to say to my friends, that they should make an Ironman movie, but everyone laughed and said that the special effects will look silly. That was back in the early 1980s. But, now we are in the age of computer generated images. Just for you Ironman fan’s, to see him come to live with such spectacular graphics is reason enough to spend your hard-earned $10. I doubt anyone will find fault with this movie unless they went in to try disliking it.